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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Quote Originally Posted by Jeff D'Silva View Post
    Hey here is a recent set I did, any feedback is appreciated:

    It felt like you broke character when you told the audience you only had a minute left. I enjoyed it though.



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Hey dude, thanks for the feedback! I totally did break unfortunately.

    Here is a recent set I did:



    and this




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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    This is from last summer before I got married. I was at Absolute Comedy in Toronto. Big fan of that club.




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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    That was great. I loved the mimed ejaculate/pterodactyl sounds.



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Quote Originally Posted by PoisonSpanking View Post
    That was great. I loved the mimed ejaculate/pterodactyl sounds.
    Ha thanks dude. It's how I became a man.



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Jeff: Your views on sauce allocation were poignant.
    Cliff: Your poem made me feel feelings I no longer believed I possessed.
    Both: Very funny.



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Here's my set from my school's comedy competition. Let me know if there's anything I can work and such. Thanks in advance!



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    You don't seem very confident in your material. And the pauses caused by reading mid-bit is very jarring. You're talking about the girl in the orgy, and then you read "I don't think I could be in an orgy" it doesn't flow naturally. Memorize the flow of your material, not all the words but the premise and the punchlines.

    Shake the pizza was probably the best line even though it was a mistake because it felt like you weren't reading from a script and you had natural delivery.

    Also is this heavily editted? It seems like there are a lot of cuts. And ending it turns out this guy gave me a very big tip is weird; it's good to leave on a nice laugh.

    And sorry if this sounds harsh but I have the same problems myself. How long have you been doing it?



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Here's the first video of me in a few years (as far as I know). I apologize that it's super blurry.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q_Eg5EOlCEU



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Quote Originally Posted by JayP7 View Post
    Here's the first video of me in a few years
    It's from THE FUTURE???


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    Re: Video of You pt Deux



    Here's a video of me that is secretly just audio of me.



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NekZzR8UZxs

    Feedback/advice/criticism please.

    I have a major problem with this bit but I'll voice that after I've heard what some of you guys think.



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Quote Originally Posted by smartbunny View Post
    It's from THE FUTURE???
    I better wait to watch this for a couple years. I want to be sure I'll get the references.
    I host a comedy podcast about parenting.
    http://stayathomedadcast.com



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Quote Originally Posted by punchdrunkblake View Post
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NekZzR8UZxs

    Feedback/advice/criticism please.

    I have a major problem with this bit but I'll voice that after I've heard what some of you guys think.
    Is there any chance you are an Eddie Pepitone fan?
    I host a comedy podcast about parenting.
    http://stayathomedadcast.com



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Quote Originally Posted by Chase Roper View Post
    Is there any chance you are an Eddie Pepitone fan?
    Annnnnd there we go...

    Now; what am I going to do about it?

    (Thank you for replying/engaging, by the way.)



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Hi guys,

    Here's me doing a storytelling thing that's different for me, don't know how it went: http://youtu.be/0lBrY7kNnwE


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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    And here is a recent Stand Up set



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    Hi! I am new here. Here is one of my sets. Subscribe to my channel while you're there! Thanks gang!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5DVcsUg1cE0



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    Re: Video of You pt Deux

    This one might be easier to hear:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3XWU...feature=relmfu



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