Really good for your first time, iambobbmac. Way better than mine. You're a good writer, keep at it.
Does anyone have any tips on memorizing? I've taken a list of keywords for each bit on a napkin with my drink, so that every time I take a sip i can take a quick peak at it. After watching my last video, I noticed that I took a drink after every bit and turned away from the audience way to much. I've tried memorizing my list, but I fail every time... and revert to the list. Tips, suggestions?