I'm looking for feedback on some of the material I've posted here on AST, and I've decided to offer the same in return.

If there's interest, maybe this thread can remain a constant source of review and discussion for amateur (or pros) comics/comedy writers.

The deal is, leave some feedback regarding one or more of the items on this thread (links to written material, video, or audio), then offer a link to your own stuff.

Since I'm first, I'll leave feedback on posts that follow mine.

I suggest that members wait until three or more others post their material before posting another.

Here's mine (I like writing cult-related material):

A Little Bo Peep Story